lilyyan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Machinations]

Obviously the mixing needs more work, but I really like the idea.

[Home Stretch (JAMuary Day 19?)]

could use more instruments but i really like the melodies regardless

GlaceonDash responds:

Honestly, I agree there

[shrineshrineshrine]

vibe is amazing af, if anything i think the kick should have a bigger thump

[180 shots a minute [Edited]]

easily one of my favorite tracks -- this style works so well

[La Chevauchée des Vach'Kyries]

i hear a bit of clashing between melodies, but this sounds suuuuuper epic!! really nice, especially since you made it in half an hour -- really like that flute run you put in!

Daru925 responds:

Oh yeah, ahah, i agree with the clashing; if i were to make a full track of it, i would probably separate them or add better melodies^^
It really was a fun run to get some over the top epic stacked stuff, something i never really tried before.
Thanks a bunch for listening, and for feedback, much appreciated!

[Space Trip]

i think the vibe is there, but one thing that really bothers me is that top pluck is very out of tune. other than that, i think it could potentially use a bit more ambient sound and maybe louder reverb? overall though, i think this is a solid creation.

NikoN1nja responds:

Thanks for review, I have some problems when it comes to additional sound, but I'll try to fix that in the next song.

[The Lake (JAMuary Day 13)]

wowwww this is so good, i really love the atmosphere the solo piano melody creates! could potentially use more reverb and a little bit more background ambience though; also i think this is more personal taste but i think the bass notes sometimes clash with the top notes

GlaceonDash responds:

Maybe, maybe

[Sensory Bloodlust]

love the energy and the overall idea, there's a couple of break points in the drop that don't really work for me (01:37 in particular), the buildup could perhaps use a few more elements and the overall mixing does need to be tidied a little (mostly talking about the mid and mid low frequencies) but again this is such a banger